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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Kyo » Sat Dec 20, 2014 4:17 pm

Natsu wrote:It actually sounds pretty good, I really think many people would enjoy it. It all is about tastes, and I'm sure many people would definitely rejoice with your manga.

I guess all that remains is your non-cancelled third story right? I can't wait to give it a read.

I can try it, but I honestly think it isn't thaaat good. It takes too much time to get good (which is when the final war begins with a lot of fights and deaths) and I don't know if it can make up for it. The first half solves all the problems in Realm of Mana and the MC is the new "king". But he still isn't op or anything. I wanted him to develop slowly. I'm actually proud on the second half, though, but I don't think I can keep the reader interested enough.

Third Story:
It kinda takes its time to get interesting as well, but it isn't cliché at least. I have no name for this story yet, but I haven't seen something like this before so I guess it's somewhat original?

Year 2029 is coming to an end. In the past few years, half of humanity was eradicated by an epidemic called "Cataclysmic Lifeblood Contamination" (abbreviated with Catablood); it was the biggest disaster of 21st century. One Chemist, who was also called "hero of the 21st century" found out the cause of the epidemic and managed to clear the world from it. Life finally resumes as it should for highschool student Haru.

Where one disaster ended, a new disaster began. As the midnight-bells are ringing; 00:00 January 1st year 2030, humanity lost consciousness.

When Haru woke up, all he saw was black. He couldn't move, he couldn't even see or feel his own body, he only heard a voice: "In one year, you all will die, unless you can prove yourself worthy to live. Kill 1000 people in the world I have created, and I will acknowledge you. Fulfill that task, and you may live." The black vanished and Haru found himself in a place he has never seen before. In this world, humanity is reborn. You, as human, only have two choices: Be strong and kill, or be weak and get killed.

So far I'd say it's the best story, but I might drop this one again and try another, idk.
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Natsu » Sat Dec 20, 2014 4:35 pm

Sounds like "The Room" from Bakuman. I like it, it has an interesting plot and I'm sure it would have a promising future. I'd suggest you'd go with that one. Then again, it isn't bad to think of many stories to then choose which to use.
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Kyo » Sat Dec 20, 2014 4:36 pm

The Room from Bakuman? ...Huh?
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Natsu » Sat Dec 20, 2014 5:00 pm

Oops, dunno where that came from. I meant "The Classroom of Truth".
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Kyo » Sat Dec 20, 2014 5:05 pm

That tells me just as much.
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Natsu » Sat Dec 20, 2014 5:11 pm

You'll find out whenever you watch Bakuman. =P
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Zeldamaster12 » Sun Dec 21, 2014 5:38 pm

Bakuman, I actually read the first like four volumes of that years ago. Not bad.
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Natsu » Sun Dec 21, 2014 5:44 pm

Yes, indeed. I haven't read the manga though.
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Knux » Wed Jan 21, 2015 10:56 am

I wrote a manga called クイックセックスマスターをクッパ
it is about a Koopa Troopa who tries to control the population of the mushroom kingdom

i drew some of it in MSpaint while i was making some AOKs and I might post it some day
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Re: Your Manga!!

PostPosted by Natsu » Wed Jan 21, 2015 2:57 pm

Why sex master? I don't think I wanna know. =P
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