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Re: Xtremegamer51's Arts And Craps

PostPosted by Mystogan » Mon Dec 01, 2014 4:23 pm

I hardly see much change, it should be made a little peachier on the skin, imo
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Re: Xtremegamer51's Arts And Craps

PostPosted by xtremgamer51 » Mon Dec 01, 2014 4:24 pm

Aysedaesi wrote:I hardly see much change, it should be made a little peachier on the skin, imo


It is brighter,but like I said,I did use an actual image of Balloon Boy from the game.I could try a different image of him from the game though,see if that works.
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PostPosted by Mystogan » Mon Dec 01, 2014 4:46 pm

It's cool art, but it'd be good to see it done as best possible. :P
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PostPosted by Natsu » Mon Dec 01, 2014 4:59 pm

Well the brightness looks ok now, definitely better.
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PostPosted by xtremgamer51 » Mon Dec 01, 2014 5:15 pm

M'kay,well since I did want to work on the shading around his eyes,once I get to that I'll try and make his skin a more peach like color.

Also I'm working on an icon for The Puppet,and after I'm done with that which character from Five Nights At Freddy's should I do next?(Since I am planning on doing all of them,maby even Shadow Toy Bonnie,Shadow Freddy,and what some people call,Balloon Girl)
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PostPosted by Natsu » Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:03 pm

I would love to see Old Bonny from FNaF2.
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PostPosted by xtremgamer51 » Mon Dec 01, 2014 6:44 pm

Natsu wrote:I would love to see Old Bonny from FNaF2.

Okie-dokie!

Also I may change the shading on this one a bit but....

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PostPosted by Natsu » Mon Dec 01, 2014 7:21 pm

I think it's worth mentioning that the brightness of your sprites is weird because you use the in-game colours. The game makes sure each character has the brightness that fits with the environment which is an almost non-illuminated space. You should make all of them brighter, including the marionette. Also, I believe the marionette has teeth.
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PostPosted by xtremgamer51 » Mon Dec 01, 2014 7:55 pm

Natsu wrote:I think it's worth mentioning that the brightness of your sprites is weird because you use the in-game colours. The game makes sure each character has the brightness that fits with the environment which is an almost non-illuminated space. You should make all of them brighter, including the marionette. Also, I believe the marionette has teeth.

Well I am gonna edit his/her sprite a bit.Also nope,the Marionette does not have teeth.
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Re: Xtremegamer51's Arts And Craps

PostPosted by Mystogan » Mon Dec 01, 2014 8:52 pm

Nice ugly drawing :P

Seriously, what's with that things head.
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